I'd like to see a time on the clock. Or have him say "it's 3 in the morning, and I cant sleep"
I love the gun! Great job on the perspective foreshortening. The entire first frame is pretty good art wise. I'd like a bit more shading though.
JUST had a nasty fight EARLIER. You could find a better way of wording that.
I like how you chose to set up the entire thing. Nice framing choices.
I like how you made the sign move caused from the banging on it.
I've got more to say, but i gotta go now.