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 Post subject: Punix-GT 6-18-2010 Making Up
PostPosted: Jun 18, 2010 5:29 pm 
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Ok, I'm seriously getting fed up with ping.fm. They just aren't posting the comic links like its supposed to. But that's ok! The new comic HAS Been posted for your enjoyment!

http://punix-gt.com/comics/2010/06/18/making-up/

Ahhh, angry sex! Enjoy!

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 Post subject: Re: Punix-GT 6-18-2010 Making Up
PostPosted: Jun 24, 2010 2:15 pm 
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I'd like to see a time on the clock. Or have him say "it's 3 in the morning, and I cant sleep"

I love the gun! Great job on the perspective foreshortening. The entire first frame is pretty good art wise. I'd like a bit more shading though.

JUST had a nasty fight EARLIER. You could find a better way of wording that. :wink:

I like how you chose to set up the entire thing. Nice framing choices.

I like how you made the sign move caused from the banging on it.

I've got more to say, but i gotta go now.

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 Post subject: Re: Punix-GT 6-18-2010 Making Up
PostPosted: Jun 28, 2010 10:04 am 
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To go along with FBM's rewording suggestion, you could have added a frame before all that showing...

Nix to Nim: "Oh yeah? Why don't you go smurf your own face?!"
Nim: "Maybe I will...at least someone will get laid tonight!"

Then a block saying "Later that night..." and then move on to the current first frame.

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 Post subject: Re: Punix-GT 6-18-2010 Making Up
PostPosted: Jul 28, 2010 8:13 am 
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You know, I think I had the most fun drawing the poster on the wall. The poster would have originally said "3 Cent Difference" but I didn't really want the focus to be on the poster itself, but rather Jad. And I feel like I did a great job with the perspective of the gun on that poster.

I should have started the first dialogue with "Its too quiet, its late, and I can't sleep"

I wish I knew how to edit the dialogue in Gimp after everything was finished. >_> If anything, I'd consider it a learning experience.

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